tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347449310006343235.post7378356298699233004..comments2023-10-02T11:43:48.954+03:00Comments on Confessions of a Pathological Procrastinator: I am onlyDanya A.http://www.blogger.com/profile/16042138564915567347noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347449310006343235.post-56164834502159376162010-04-30T13:12:14.197+03:002010-04-30T13:12:14.197+03:00You! Okay, yes, major creeping on my part. But thi...You! Okay, yes, major creeping on my part. But this: <i>no one can get close to you without tearing themselves up trying to fit into the constellation of your jagged edges</i>, yes yes indeed. Here's what I think. <br />1) MORE. <br />2) There's no reason a novel has to be a completely linear progression; a novel can be composed of vignettes that are woven together in any manner you please. <br />3) There's nothing wrong with internal monologue. Hell, what you've got here could serve as a perfectly awesome introduction to a story with all this thinking and chewing over happening in the blink of an eye prior to a simple decision (getting in a car, replying to a hello etc). Also the inner world just needs to be explored in the outer world. <br />4) I encourage novelling. Fiercely. <br />5) MORE. <br />- Moi.thegildedpestlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18072258606754689718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347449310006343235.post-9651735399777799482009-10-23T14:20:38.505+03:002009-10-23T14:20:38.505+03:00And I told you I'll comment later. I wouldn...And I told you I'll comment later. I wouldn't forget your blog even if I'm extremely super busy :]Samarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15778357679255552372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347449310006343235.post-74178697677921303072009-10-23T14:19:35.829+03:002009-10-23T14:19:35.829+03:00I'll seriously kill you if you take chemical e...I'll seriously kill you if you take chemical engineering only in college. If you don't study writing with that, I'll kill you with my bare hands. (I was gonna say "promise"). Elzibda, you're AWESOME. Remember my threat when you go to Harvard....Samarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15778357679255552372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347449310006343235.post-35002954391433812572009-10-22T15:33:26.845+03:002009-10-22T15:33:26.845+03:00DANYA! I LOOOOOOVED the "New novel excerpt.&q...DANYA! I LOOOOOOVED the "New novel excerpt."! Like seriousslyyy!! it makes sooooo much sense!!! <br />Pleassee write a book full of thoughts! I'd read it over and over.. and over again! <br />And yes I saw all the final destination movies except the last 3D 1 :p I liked the first 1, it was deep and had meaning, then in 2,3.. ad 3D.. it just got more disgusting and meaningless. It's still cool though.<br />I say watch the saw series! they're bloody, disgusting but smart and makes u think about stuff :PSarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08104163688216304614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347449310006343235.post-56613301033116424752009-10-13T13:18:23.194+03:002009-10-13T13:18:23.194+03:00Sigh...I've missed your posts! Life has been s...Sigh...I've missed your posts! Life has been so hectic, have barely had the chance to write, let alone read.<br /><br />Firstly, I'd LOVE for you to write a full blown novel, and I think that as a talented writer, you should push yourself to that level. You write beautifully, we all see that.. but now you need to see if you have the dedication to weave your words into a novel with in-depth characters, great storyline, hidden messages, fluid dialogue.. That will be the real challenge for you. So in my humble opinion, I think you should work on your plot and write the novel that will challenge you and develop you as a writer. Posting excerpts here and there is just too easy for someone of your calibre, Danya!!!<br /><br />Secondly.... Why Bahrain? Why not Dubai where they have been showing meatballs for the past 2 weeks! And I'm sure I've seen copies of Everything is Illuminated in Borders :P<br /><br />Final Destination was hilarious.. I haven't seen the third, but thought I'd watch the fourth for fun. As a movie, it was ridiculous but entertaining nevertheless.<br /><br />Okay I've written enough I think!Ghost Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18361758796896345706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347449310006343235.post-28518592982017391382009-10-12T21:55:51.702+03:002009-10-12T21:55:51.702+03:00"Facial expressions become difficult for you ..."Facial expressions become difficult for you to arrange, because you feel (or, rather, not feel) the same way about everything."<br /><br />ha.<br /><br />by the way, your writing has such a clear voice, i really enjoy reading it. i like the idea about bits and pieces and i feel like plots are overrated. <br /><br />you could publish a book of character sketches and i'd read...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02978433108094833639noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347449310006343235.post-54081793077786154012009-10-12T18:36:53.371+03:002009-10-12T18:36:53.371+03:00The blog is a great forum for short pieces, like y...The blog is a great forum for short pieces, like yours ... It's brilliant, you definitely must publish more.<br /><br />It's true what you say - I think everyone feels it at some point. It's human.<br /><br />But not everyone talks about it, so you should. That's good enough reason for a novel. :)Sharon McPhersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15568442958046594336noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347449310006343235.post-40912491414392823842009-10-11T05:40:19.360+03:002009-10-11T05:40:19.360+03:00There were so many thoughts of yours I would love ...There were so many thoughts of yours I would love to quote back to you. I won't (THIS TIME). <br /><br />I don't want to go into too much detail but, wish to admit my twin and I one day looked at one another after hanging out with friends that always seemed to laugh for hours on end. <br /><br />We were crushed because our abusive household made it so hard to laugh when inside we were about to cry.<br /><br />-just felt inspired to share :)<br /><br />Love you Danya!Wutheringhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03626296751779121395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347449310006343235.post-19701790917717652522009-10-10T22:44:54.052+03:002009-10-10T22:44:54.052+03:00Danya! First up, beautiful writing. really. i like...Danya! First up, beautiful writing. really. i like how real it seems. to me anyway..<br /><br />also, love postal service. <br /><br />3. I like your fellow blogger's idea of sticking to short pieces. <br /><br />d. you might be weird, but you're not strange. unless strange is a good thing. cause i think you're made up of good things.<br /><br />and 5. I really think you should send me some pictures :)<br />kelsie.lm@gmail.com<br /><br />have a lovely saturdayKelsie Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14068559582991023176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347449310006343235.post-29595292187187893212009-10-10T21:46:04.485+03:002009-10-10T21:46:04.485+03:00This is my first visit and I think it'll be my...This is my first visit and I think it'll be my first of many ;) Thanks for following my blog!ladytruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06033228344935713117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347449310006343235.post-75730106551619869692009-10-10T08:43:25.033+03:002009-10-10T08:43:25.033+03:001st of all, good for youuu! I WAS going to Bahrain...1st of all, good for youuu! I WAS going to Bahrain this weekend as well, but ah well. I didn't !!<br /><br />Regarding the piece; pretty as always. I was really hooked. And Interesting thing mentioning writing pieces, cuz as I can see, you're great at it! Soo, I say keep writing pieces if that's convenient with you!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347449310006343235.post-2659680330563912252009-10-10T04:29:12.355+03:002009-10-10T04:29:12.355+03:00Break out of that aloneness.
It's fun out her...Break out of that aloneness.<br /><br />It's fun out here in the world. Visit me at Secret Story Time.<br /><br />I'm following You now.<br /><br />Thanks, SecretiaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347449310006343235.post-80539479302143619082009-10-10T01:03:49.008+03:002009-10-10T01:03:49.008+03:00*stands up and claps with tears in eyes*
you'v...*stands up and claps with tears in eyes*<br />you've finally just let it all pour out for the hideous world to see.<br />they get to take a peek in your ugly squiggling insides and get to judge. to sit and puke up later in their own living rooms.<br /><br />i love you. i lose this.<br />perfection.<br />both of you.Moondust(:https://www.blogger.com/profile/13628936126942052427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347449310006343235.post-82787978110771844522009-10-09T21:39:48.460+03:002009-10-09T21:39:48.460+03:00Fiiiiine i'll comment 8-)
It's very psych...Fiiiiine i'll comment 8-)<br /><br />It's very psychological what she's going through =) As you said though it does seem a little laboured but hey! the concept is there! I'm no novel expert though =/ You already know what I think. I can never sum it up in words.<br /><br />lol Final Destination. To tell you the truth I loved the story of the first and sort of the second one. The third was just simply about dying and the fourth seems even more about that. Watching the video of a couple of their deaths it seemsthe main character is just going "oh dam my best friend died" as opposed to "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!" Yes i'd watch it with you :P but stuff paying 15 bucks in the cinema to see it. I'll save that for Saw 6Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347449310006343235.post-92079621531416523042009-10-09T21:14:07.972+03:002009-10-09T21:14:07.972+03:00This is .. Nothing short of brilliant. Your right....This is .. Nothing short of brilliant. Your right. I think most people are too scared to explore these thoughts.<br />I love the short pieces idea, but I do think you have a good plot. From what you told me anyway.<br />You keep getting better and better. Promise not to forget about us, de little folks, once your all big and famous ?<br />And you know what I think about the Final Destination movies -_-<br />Good luck in school tomorrow ! Im going to miss hanging out with you =( Dont get too busy for me !JJnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347449310006343235.post-35034851876331883022009-10-09T16:15:10.405+03:002009-10-09T16:15:10.405+03:00Hehehehe, thanks so much for your comment on my bl...Hehehehe, thanks so much for your comment on my blog, Danya! It's always good to hear from new readers...and yes, definitely check those first 2 songs out...good stuff! Hey, I like your blog too!Organic Meatbaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00740368286985980207noreply@blogger.com